A continuing...

This was just a continuing from a story that was set for homework at school. But I thought it was so good I wanted to put it on this sight! I don't know the story because like I said it's a continuing from a story.
But anyway please enjoy it ^^!!

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"What have we done... what have we done to the past?" They questioned to themselves as the darkness was leaking through the windows. They were pulled back, by what? Fear, darkness?... No, it must be an illusion. The doors faded and the walls closed in... rapidly, they had to think fast. "What shall we do! I'm scared!" Sarah trembled and gripped onto David like as if he was a part of her. It was close to them, it's breath dragged down their back and shivered their bones. "It's here!" David was in shock and was to terrified to turn so the only option was, to run.

It pulled it's way towards them, David and Sarah started running like a hare being hunted by a fox, the floor was covered in a thick puddle of fog, they aren't outside then were are they? A strong sent of damp filled the air, moist bricks and moss covered the floor, with grass and strange flowers littering the place. "Where are we?" Sarah whispered through the echoing mists. "David?..." But no response. It was to hard to see so she stretched her arms in front of her and moved forward. "Hello, David... Where are you!" She began to panic, before she knew her legs were thrown into a sprint. "DAVID!" Sarah shouted, as she was running and running the fog became thicker and everything was disappearing into white, plain white, even her arms disappeared into white. She stopped, her heart was pumping non-stop, it felt like her ribs were about to brake because of her expanding heart rate. Sarah sat in the moist moss, her tears trickled down her face and fell into her mouth, she whispered "David...where are...you.."

And that's all! I hope my teacher likes it ^3^ and thank you for reading it!

Wow- that was awesome! The whole thing played out in my head like a movie!!! Continue!!!!!!

ahaha..nice one!

Aww! Thanks you guys! Today I'm gonna hand in the story! I hope I get it graded! I think it's the best work I did ^^!
Thanks again everyone!

Gamer Gal wrote:

Aww! Thanks you guys! Today I'm gonna hand in the story! I hope I get it graded! I think it's the best work I did ^^!
Thanks again everyone!

it is really good!

good luck! I'm sure you'll get an A+ lol

i hope you got an A..

lol! I do to! The last time I had something graded I got C- ¬¬ I suposse it's good... But that was my first assessment! I will do better ^^

Gamer Gal wrote:

lol! I do to! The last time I had something graded I got C- ¬¬ I suposse it's good... But that was my first assessment! I will do better ^^

try and try..

OMGosh! This is soooo tyipical, on my lesson on monday with my teacher guess what! She didn't grade it! She said that she couldn't finish marking it so I have to wait for another week to get my grade!! [Because I have her once a week] SOOOO Tyipical.... >8(

Maybe, just maybe, it was SO good that she lost all feeling in her arm and couldn't comment on how awesome it was. Yes, I am now convinced that was what happened xD

I finally found out my grade! *drum roll*

B-
. . .

*sniff*

Gamer Gal wrote:

I finally found out my grade! *drum roll*

B-
. . .

*sniff*

Aww, don't worry yourself.
Just keep practicing!
And then you'll get an A+!
Practice makes better. (:

Ballad Of The Fool wrote:

Gamer Gal wrote:

I finally found out my grade! *drum roll*

B-
. . .

*sniff*

Aww, don't worry yourself.
Just keep practicing!
And then you'll get an A+!
Practice makes better. (:

Thanks balled! Love the advice and I will use it!
Anyway I'm starting a new story for my class [...yay...] cus the teacher is to lazy to use her imagination! Um... and it's called "House number 10" I'll put it on here as a new topic.

stephxluke wrote:

good luck! I'm sure you'll get an A+ lol

I FOUND ANOTHER ONE!!!

35bell wrote:

stephxluke wrote:

good luck! I'm sure you'll get an A+ lol

I FOUND ANOTHER ONE!!!

NO FAIR, my topic my skroll! REVENGE!!!! lol!

BUT BUT I FOUND IT FIRST! DDD8

*hgs the scroll tight to chest and hisses* MIIINE! XD

stephxluke wrote:

good luck! I'm sure you'll get an A+ lol

I found a scroll tehe!

Sweetness, that scroll has already been found by 35Bell. There's plenty more around the forum! Look around!