Divine Aspiration

~A shooting star, a falling star, a star that does not shine

This pleasant view

Of midnight's stew

An author dubs divine


Yet wonderment and curious thoughts

Does fill the novelist's mind

As she sits and stares with mindful watch

At the star that dares not shine


The tranquil feeling of similarity so fine

Plays across her heart

As the author is not yet to shine

This is only just her start~

This is good! Sorry but I'm terrible at poetry. At writing, reading, and analyzing it
I'm such a fail.

BiddyAuthor wrote:

This is good! Sorry but I'm terrible at poetry. At writing, reading, and analyzing it
I'm such a fail.

Even if that was true (which I'm sure it's NOT) you whip up a pretty mean story . So it's all good!

LatteCurlz wrote:

BiddyAuthor wrote:

This is good! Sorry but I'm terrible at poetry. At writing, reading, and analyzing it
I'm such a fail.

Even if that was true (which I'm sure it's NOT) you whip up a pretty mean story . So it's all good!

Thanks! I take pride in my stories especially when I'm starting to be discovered on fanfics

Which reminds me, I have to start advertising your new story on Dodging Bullets (more people read that one ya know). It's a bit different from Hikari's Choice...but I like the way Molly's Choice is going! (I also love the abbreviation form "MC" lol like MC Hammer lol! )

LatteCurlz wrote:

Which reminds me, I have to start advertising your new story on Dodging Bullets (more people read that one ya know). It's a bit different from Hikari's Choice...but I like the way Molly's Choice is going! (I also love the abbreviation form "MC" lol like MC Hammer lol! )

Really you would do that? Thanks! And yup, it is distinctly different from HC. It has more supernatural properties and has more mystery such as what was the thing that killed her mother, why does she not trust herself as much to be herself around Kathy, Luke, Chase, and Gill? There are certain parts of the story (which is where it is at the moment) where her life seems normal, but then you are put back into a place where she becomes mysterious within her thoughts

And yeah, I thought of that too... MC Hammer... hehe.

Thanks a lot, now you're gonna make me wanna rush you in putting up the next chapter! And I never rush! Lol.

OOH! That was really good. :DD

If I tried to write poetry, I'd be like:

The cat

That wore a hat

Sat on a mat.

It was fat.

BECAUSE IT NEEDS TO LAY OFF THE MCDONALD'S.

Mine was so bootiful, right?

BUT, LATTE, YOURS WAS LEGIT INCREDIBLE.

And I hope you guys don't think I'm stalking you...because I am.
xDDD I'm sorry, but you two are the only people I somewhat know around here.

It was so gorgeous it made me cry with joy . Loved every bit of it . Nah, I love it when people stalk me...hold on I take that back. I love it when my crazy friends stalk me! A random creepy person would definitely be no bueno! NO BUENO I SAY!