A bit more on the personality and history. Personality should be 1 paragraph, and history should be at least 2 paragraphs. Most of that history looks like it belongs in Personality.
Also, here is the current list of who's where:
Real World: Open /Pokemon World: Sophie Evans
Real World: Robert Goldsmith /Pokemon World: Matthew Ryder
Real World: Open /Pokemon World: Open
Real World: Open /Pokemon World: Rina Curran
If you're off in Oreburg or someplace else, get yourself to one of these places. There should be one person from the real world and one person from the Pokemon world in each place. If I have to restart the whole RP, I will. People shouldn't be leaving their starting locations until they pair up with their Pokemon world/Real world partner. Also, travel between towns takes anywhere from half a day to several days if traveling on foot.