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Kritten
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PostSubject: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptySun Oct 26, 2008 1:37 am

I made this poem for a project and I fell in love with the results. It was supposed to be a sonnet, but I messed up with the rhyme pattern.

That Blue, Blue Sky


If you could fly you’d never come back to me,
You’d fly to that blue, oh so blue sky.
The place that you’ve always wanted to see,
That you can reach if you fly.

I often wonder if I changed my way,
If you’d take me too.
It is my fault that I turned you away,
Now I only want to fly to you.

My only dream is to fly to that blue, oh so blue sky,
So I can be with you.
Oh, how I dream if I could fly,
So my heart will no longer be blue.

If I could fly to that blue, blue sky,
I’d be with you watching time go by.
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PostSubject: Re: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptySun Oct 26, 2008 1:40 am

Sweet, cute and so.. Awwwwwwweee! ^^
I love it!
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PostSubject: Re: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptySun Oct 26, 2008 1:54 am

I am in love!
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Louisa
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PostSubject: Re: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptySun Oct 26, 2008 2:16 am

Whaaaaaat?
With who? -gossipsh-
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PostSubject: Re: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptySun Oct 26, 2008 2:55 am

lol!!!! *ROTFL Beats fists against floor*

not with who and it wasn't meant literally. I meant I love her poem.

it's really aweomse by the way, kitty.
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PostSubject: Re: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptySun Oct 26, 2008 7:02 pm

Thanks, I'm happy you think so. Only if my Language Art teacher would love it that much too.
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PostSubject: Re: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptySun Oct 26, 2008 7:17 pm

Sorry, pathetic blonde moment -melts-
But I love it tooooo!
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PostSubject: Re: That Blue, Blue Sky   That Blue, Blue Sky EmptyMon Dec 29, 2008 5:44 am

How cute, I love it ^^
I like poems but When i try to make one I cant for some reason. I'm Not a very good rhymer
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