The way she uses "aw" as a substitute for "o" bugs me to no end. Examples:
"hawt"
"nawt"
and
"Ehmawgahd."
Those are so annoying, I'm sorry.
Plus, the way the author just has to describe EXACTLY what designer, color, etc. the characters are wearing...it's not nessecary.
They're probably actually really interesting books, but little things like that are enough to turn me off from a series.