the PHANTOM of the night SKYe

i want to make a story but my story isn't really good..hmm


5 spring year 1 10.00 p.m
i walked to romana's mansion. i wanted to find harvest sprite. from the distance i saw a man with white hair and leopard t-shirt came out from the mansion. the boy saw me and smiled.
"hey beautiful, do i know you?"he asked
"mmm no...i guess"i blushed, someone called me beautiful, oh my..
"okay, i'm phantom skye, but you can call me skye"
"iam tennira"
"nice to meet you tennira"he smiled
suddenly lumina appeared.
"hey, comeback you thief!!"lumina yelled
"a thief?"i whispered
"princess, do not angry. your anger makes your beauty gone."he said softly
"really?"lumina blushed
"of course, you better sleep for your beauty"
"oh um okay"then lumina went back to her mansion.
"tennira i have to go..bye sweet dream"he said. then he left me.
i was speechless. he's a thief and he's good at teasing people. after that i found harvest sprite and went back to my house.

9 spring year 1 11.00 a.m
i walked to the goddess pond and found that lumina was talking with muffy. i came closer to them.
"hey, what are you talking about, girls?"i said.
"oh, we're talking about the phantom skye"lumina answered.
"phantom skye?the boy who came to your house last night?"
"yeah, he's cute and every girls like him"said lumina, she blushed.
"yeah,unfortunately he's a thief"said muffy.
"yep, and he only appear at night in here, goddess pond"said lumina.
"umm, hey gotta go bye"i said.
then lumina and muffy continued talking. 'he only appear at night in the here, goddess pond' i thought about that sentence all day.then i decided to wait him in the goddess pond.

9 spring year 1 11.00 p.m
i've waited since 09.00 p.m. i felt sleepy. suddenly i saw murrey. i asked him about the phantom skye.
"murrey, have you ever seen a boy in leopard t-shirt with white hair?"
"no, but murrey heard footsteps recently"murrey answered.
"really?thanks"
then i waited for him. but i still felt sleepy and slept in the ground. suddenly i heard footsteps. i awoke and i saw a boy in leopard t-shirt with white hair.


(mm, maybe i'll continue later )

good!! :->

thank you!!

well,from the looks of it..i think this way better than my story..

hahaha and i think your story is better than mine

no...yours is better..

i was referring to the runaway,,

PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE continue. =)

CarboMcoco wrote:

PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE continue. =)

i agreed..go onward!!

9 spring year 1 11.45 p.m

"skye"i whispered.
he noticed me.he smiled and came closer.
"tennira what are you doing here?it's almost midnight?"he said softly.
"umm..i,i"i said.
'oh no what am i doing here?waiting for skye?but for what?'i thought.
"hello?are okay sweetie?"
"um oh yeah i'm okay, so what are you doing here?"i asked him.
"looking at the pond,someone told me that a goddess lives here."
"oh, and do you believe that a goddess lives here?"
"i don't know but i think i'm talking with an angel right now."he smiled.
he sat on the ground and i sat beside him. i can feel my face turns red.
"skye, why do you come at the midnight?"i asked him.
"i don't know i just love night."
"wow the night would happy if heard that"
"what?"
"no..nothing"
"it's really late, why don't you go home?"he said.
"oh yeah, you right, um skye.."
"yes?"
"can we meet again?"
"i'll waiting for you here tomorrow."
"okay,bye"
"be careful tennira"he said.
i winked at him. suddenly i felt my heart beat faster. i don't know why. am i sick?i don't know. so i decided to meet dr.hardy tomorrow.

it's getting better!!!

*gets jittery* c-c-c-c-continue p-p-p-p-please...