afsangel
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 | Subject: The snow that never melts  Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:23 pm | |
| There's a poem, i was once told. Of a distant place where it never snowed.
The birds always chriped and the bees always hummed. The frogs leaped onto the water lilys and the butterflys grew flowers. I always drept of a place like that, but as i got older, those dreams were gone with the wind. For here the trees are barren and nature doesn't sing. All is silent and chilly and cold,and the days are rarley warm. Though people have hope and dreams, i know personally, once you enter this barren land, there is not going back. Though the land cooes you closer, and draws you near, she's as cold as the ice she makes. I know she's smooth like velvet, i know she's soft like felt. But Once your here there's no going back, the snow that never melts. *coughbadpoemcough*
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Red Riding Hood
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| | Subject: Re: The snow that never melts Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:44 pm | |
| Awww, very pretty. <8]
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Nice use of adjectives. ;D | |
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stephxluke
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| | Subject: Re: The snow that never melts Fri Jan 08, 2010 1:19 am | |
| Beautiful! It wasn't bad at all! Very pretty. I wish that poem was where I lived. Where I am its, "the snow that never COMES" lol
Great job! | |
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