Bloody Tears

Subject: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:08 pm

It's been three weeks, since that fateful day
I still remeber the time we used to run and play.
But now i fear for the very worst
I wait silently in my basment, for the paypent of foolishness, or what it's worth.
If i had one regret, it would be making this mistake
and watching everybody suffer, and make great haste
The end is near now, i am full of fear
So much that on the floor, are my bloody tears!

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:12 pm

Hmmm...
You spelt bloody wrong. Otherwise it's good it has a nice dark feeling to it. Very misterious and mournful.

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:13 pm

thanks, i'm speeling imapred XD i'll fix it asap

Sprite Number of posts : 2119 Roleplay Name : Blue

Ohh, very nice~
You've neatly captured an isolated grievance, and immense regret.
I CAN FEEL THE AWESOME RADIATING FROM THIS POEM~

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:35 pm

and blood. the scent is strong with this one

Sprite Number of posts : 2119 Roleplay Name : Blue

Was that a Star Wars parody? XD

INDEED. (Perfect time for the Blood song!)

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:39 pm

*cough*

Farmer Number of posts : 205 Roleplay Name : Jake

WHOA 0.0
I love it! Kinda scary.. XD
<3

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:11 am

YISH! EPIC! >:3

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:15 am

I love it the most!!!

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:20 am

thanks~ ^^

Subject: Re: Bloody tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 4:56 am

iAwesome wrote:: WHOA 0.0
I love it! Kinda scary.. XD
<3

Yes it is kinda scary but good at the same time. 0.0

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 11:56 am

thanks~ love the dress

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 3:40 pm

afsangel wrote:: thanks~ love the dress

No problem~And Thank you!

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 4:37 pm

ooo O_O FINALLY got to read something good ... <3
Just got to love the feeling it gives...
Silent,dark,lonely,beautiful.... and chaotic
"Peace is only a dream... A dream that humanity crated to feel safe and happy... But there will never be peace, since even in the brightest soul there always will be darkness" forgot who said that but the person is realllly smart~

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 8:07 pm

i bet that person is. but whos' to say the world can't be peaceful.

Subject: Re: Bloddy Tears Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:08 pm

Sanaka*~ wrote:: ooo O_O FINALLY got to read something good ... <3
Just got to love the feeling it gives...
Silent,dark,lonely,beautiful.... and chaotic
"Peace is only a dream... A dream that humanity crated to feel safe and happy... But there will never be peace, since even in the brightest soul there always will be darkness" forgot who said that but the person is realllly smart~

Uh Sanaka? are you a goth or an Emo? O_O

Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:47 pm

she's GMO! 8D

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