i wish i have three hearts-claire

i'm still working out the scene where doctor will enter the love triangle and then turn ...into a love square..

i've got an idea but then it wouldn't be your work so i'll leave it to you to work out

*the next morning..
claire work and finish her job chores at 12 noon just in time for lunch*
claire:i'm so hungry..*stomach grumbling*
*claire went to the inn*
*she was shocked to see his two prince charming was there at one of the tables*
claire:hi cliff and gray!!
gray:hi too..
cliff:nice to see you..
*the two smiled at claire happily that made claire so blushed*
claire:what are you two eating?
cliff:just plain rice and the inn's lunch special..
claire:i like some too..
gray:i'll come with you..i want some more..
*gray's words really make claire blush more*
claire:o-ok..
*at the counter*
doug:oh claire nice to see you again..i'm doug..
claire:thanks nice to meet you..
doug:so want it will be today?
gray:two lunch specials..
gray:i'll pay them for you..
claire:no..i have money..
gray:but you need them for farming..you must save some money...
claire:thanks*hugs gray*
gray:*blushes*
*cliff saw claire hugged gray,he felt something instead he was happy for his friend he felt a little jealous*
*meanwhile at the clinic*
doctor:i'm going to hte inn to eat so watch for the clinic while i'm gone..
elli:sure doctor...
*doctor went to the inn*
gray:you could stop now..*still blushing*
claire:oopss.i overdo it..*blush a little*
doctor:doug i need a lunch special..
*claire was so dazzled to see the doctor*
*she stared at a doctor for a while*
claire:he's so handsome..
gray:who's handsome?*gray was bushing thinking he was the one being mention by claire..*
*after doctor was done buying his lunch special he went to the table were cliff is sitting since the place is packed with many customers*
claire:*daydreaming*
gray:umm..claire..can you hear me?
claire;*daydreaming*
gray:claire..*building anger*
claire:*daydreaming*
gray:claire!!!*he shouted at the blonde's ears and she snap out of it*
claire:sorry gray..*she noticed the doctor was sitting in the table were cliff is sitting so she decided to sit there with the three cutest guys of her life*

claire:what a coincidence...were all in the same table..
doctor:you must be claire right?
claire:yes i am..
doctor:i'm the doctor..
claire:is doctor really your name?
doctor:*hids face*yes it is..
claire:*i doubt it*well,cliff,gray...what are you eating?
gray and cliff:lunch special...
claire:we all ate the same dishes*daydream again**we're destiny!*
doctor:is your claire alright?
gray:she will be when we shout at her..
cliff:i think that's not a good idea...
claire:*snaps out*well let's eat..


a few minutes later...

claire:is everyone done eating?i'll take your plates cliff,gray and doctor..
doctor:i should carry it...
claire:no,i'm fine..i'll carry it..
*and when the two wanted to carry the plates their hands touch each other*
doctor:*blush*i--i'll carry it..*pick the plates quickly*
claire:*blush**he's so hot!*
*the two boys felt a little jealousy back there*

*the doctor carried the plates and then went to the clinic without saying goodbye to claire*

claire:where is the doctor?
cliff:i didn't noticed him..*he lied,cliff noticed him*
gray:i didn't noticed him too..*he lied also*


*to be continued*

claire:goodbye guys..i'm going back to work..
gray:goodbye..
cliff:bye!!*waves hand*
*claire didn't actually go to work she went to the clinic to see the doctor*
*opens clinic door*
doctor:hi..claire..
claire:hi doctor..*claire seemingly smiles*
doctor:can you come back later the clinic is closed during wednesday..
claire:no..i'm here for a check-up..
doctor:well,then what do you want?
claire:just to talk to you..
doctor:*slight blush*umm..
claire:you haven't tell me your real name...
doctor:my real name..it's a secret..
claire:don't be afraid to tell me..i'm here by your side..
doctor:trent.
claire;trent,*smiles*your name is cool..
doctor:it is.?*blush*
claire:so cool better then just doctor..

this getting so good

claire:plain doctor is boring..
doctor:i see.*smiles back*
claire:now you smiled..you just have a killer smile..
doctor:*blusH*
claire:so can i call you trent?
doctor:*still blushing*i guess so..
claire:i better go home..i need to feed my chickens..
doctor:well,goodbye claire..
claire:goodbye too trent*winks and smiles*
doctor:*blushing red*
*leaves and then closes the door*
doctor:she's...interesting..

claire exits the clinic and then went to the farm for work..
a few hours of working she decided to go to mother's hill for a rest..

she was near to the hill when she noticed cliff was there to...she felt excited..she quickly climbed up to mother's hill..

claire:hi cliff*she happily shout*
cliff:oh hi claire...*hids face*
claire:don't hide your cute face from me..
cliff:*blush*
claire:so what are you doing here...
cliff:seeing the beautiful view from here..
claire:*looks up at the sky*it is beautiful here..
cliff:it's so wonderful seeing the beautiful nature from here...
claire:yeah..and with you i think it is beautiful..
cliff:*blush again*

*as they were talking they saw the sundown*
cliff:it's so beautiful here...*whisper:i'll gonna miss this part of the day*
claire:*she heard cliff's whisper*waht?why?
cliff:no it was just nothing..don't think about it..
claire:no..don't hide it from me..i heard it..are you...leaving?
cliff:*hid face and then replies with a low voice*yes...
claire:don't leave..
cliff:why..i'm gonna run out of money..
claire:i'll help you..
cliff:no...you just started working you'll never paid me..
claire:*low voice*you're right..
cliff:i appreciate your help..but i think this is not the right time..
claire:*thinks and stands up*yes..you mustn't lose hope..i'll offer you this song..our song..

*claire singing*

I was riding shotgun with my hair undone in the front seat of his car
He’s got a one-hand feel on the steering wheel
The other on my heart
I look around, turn the radio down
He says baby is something wrong?
I say nothing I was just thinking how we don’t have a song
And he says…

[Chorus:]

Our song is the slamming screen door,
Sneakin’ out late, tapping on your window
When we’re on the phone and you talk real slow
Cause it’s late and your mama don’t know
Our song is the way you laugh
The first date “man, I didn’t kiss her, and I should have”
And when I got home … before I said amen
Asking God if he could play it again

I was walking up the front porch steps after everything that day
Had gone all wrong and been trampled on
And lost and thrown away
Got to the hallway, well on my way to my lovin’ bed
I almost didn’t notice all the roses
And the note that said…

[Repeat Chorus]

I’ve heard every album, listened to the radio
Waited for something to come along
That was as good as our song…

Cause our song is the slamming screen door
Sneaking out late, tapping on his window
When we’re on the phone and he talks real slow
Cause it’s late and his mama don’t know
Our song is the way he laughs
The first date “man, I didn’t kiss him, and I should have”
And when I got home, before I said amen
Asking God if he could play it again

I was riding shotgun with my hair undone
In the front seat of his car
I grabbed a pen and an old napkin
And I… wrote down our song
*cliff was so amazed and inspired*
claire:do you like it?
cliff:*blush*like it..*smiles*
claire:just remember that the song's title is our song not my song..
cliff:why?is that important..?
claire:meaning i'll be here by your side...
cliff:thanks claire you made me happy...you're my inspiration..
claire:sure..i'll be happy to help..*smile*
cliff:thank you very much*hugs claire*thank you!!!
claire:*blushing*
*as the sun go down and the moon rising,the romantic light of the moon shined them with a lot of hope*
*as they set home,they said a sweet goodbye to one another*
*and then when claire reached home she excitedly wrote down the wonderful happenings of the day*

awesome, feed me more or else you will be a culinary masterpiece of mine!"

REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!

i entered this to the contest!!!

really? I really want to win but it would be alright if you won i suppose...

dear diary,
i was glad that i helped cliff with his problem..
i hope he realized that he must not lose hope..
i wish i had the courage to say those magical words i love him...
claire..
*at cliff's room*
cliff:she make me feel very happy...i think i'm in love with her..
*cliff went to sleep with a smile on his face*
*morning as usual claire first finished her work and then went to the mine for extra money*
*she saw gray there too**at the mine*
gray:*smiles*hi there claire..
claire:hi gray..
claire:mining..right?
gray:yeah..as usual...let me teach you some of what i know...if you like?
claire:i'll be glad to..and then i'll teach you too..
*the two teach each other's waht they know..*
claire:my god*pant*mining is so exhausting...
gray:it sure is...wait for me outside..i have something to mine first..
claire:sure..
*at the falls*
claire:gray sure is industrious..
gray:ta-daa...
claire:oh..*surprised*what is that?*points on the red jewel*
gray:it's a ruby..do you want it..i mine it just for you..*hands ruby*
claire:thanks gray..*holds gray's hand*you inspired me to work harder..

*claire started singing...*

You know our love was meant to be
The kind of love that lasts forever
And I need you here with me
From tonight until the end of time

You should know, everywhere I go
You're always on my mind, in my heart
In my soul

You're the meaning in my life
You're the inspiration
You bring feeling to my life
You're the inspiration
Wanna have you near me
I wanna have you hear me sayin'
No one needs you more than I need you

And I know, yes I know that it's plain to see
We're so in love when we're together
And I know that I need you here with me
From tonight until the end of time

You should know, everywhere I go
Always on my mind, in my heart
In my soul

You're the meaning in my life
You're the inspiration
You bring feeling to my life
You're the inspiration
Wanna have you near me
I wanna have you hear me sayin'
No one needs you more than I need you

You're the meaning in my life
You're the inspiration
You bring feeling to my life
You're the inspiration
Wanna have you near me
I wanna have you hear me sayin'
No one needs you more than I need you

*gray was speechless that moment..he was inspired*
claire:do you like it?*still holding hands*
gray:sure..claire..you inspired me too..
claire:well,you were the one started it..
*the two kept holding hands..until it reached evening..they both said a sweet goodbye..*
*at claire's house..claire excitedly wrote down the wonderful day*

so beautiful...

dear diary,
i was so blushing when gray touched my hands..i-i i was eeeeeeeee...blushing red!!!!
but he inspired me to work even more harder...
he is so dreamy...
i wish i had two hearts for cliff and gray...
claire

*the next day,claire decided to go to the lake for a gathering wild items*
*claire notices doctor in the lake and quickly hurries*
claire:trent!!!
*doctor quickly look to see the one calling his true name..*
doctor:hi claire..
claire:what are you doing here?
doctor:i'm gathering herbs for medicine..but it seems that there nothing here..
claire:this place is relaxing..
doctor:it is because of the negative ions..
claire:ahhh..let's not talk about work..it's not fun to stay serious at work always right?
doctor:ok,then what will we do for fun?
claire:let's play tag!!!
doctor:seems childish but it's exercise...
claire:i told you..*touch doctor softly on his shoulder and ran off*tag!!!you're it!!!
doctor:i'll get you..*ran off*
*the two kept chasing on each other until it reached 8 am,they both lied in the grassland near mother's hill*
claire:*pant*that what i called exercise and fun!!!
doctor:*pant*it is tiring..
claire:so do you liked the game?
doctor:yes..thanks claire...
claire:why?
doctor:you gived me a reason not to be lonely...
claire:so the reason why you are always serious is because you're alone?

*claire stand up and stated singing a new song*

I hear the ticking of the clock
I'm lying here the room's pitch dark
I wonder where you are tonight
No answer on the telephone
And the night goes by so very slow
Oh I hope that it won't end though
Alone

Till now I always got by on my own
I never really cared until I met you
And now it chills me to the bone
How do I get you alone
How do I get you alone

You don't know how long I have wanted
to touch your lips and hold you tight, oh
You don't know how long I have waited
and I was going to tell you tonight
But the secret is still my own
and my love for you is still unknown
Alone

Till now I always got by on my own
I never really cared until I met you
And now it chills me to the bone
How do I get you alone
How do I get you alone

How do I get you alone
How do I get you alone

Alone, alone


*the doctor was staring at claire*
claire:why are you staring?*blush*
doctor:.....nothing...
claire:now,don't feel alone because i'm with you..
doctor:thank you..*blush*
claire;you must be going to work now..
doctor:*saws a flower*but before i leave i'll give this to you...*picks the flower and hands it to claire*
claire:thanks..*kiss doctor on the cheeks*i'll keep this on my vase..*rans with a smile and leave*
doctor:thanks..*blushing bright red*

*claire hurriedly went to here house and wrote down the day*

really good still

thank you..i'm about to finish it and a few chapters and it's done..the ending of this story is quite not very good...
thanks for supporting it..

if you think the ending isn't very good why don't you make it continue or something?

claire is marrying none of them...she is going to leave town...

"awww, make her marry someone, it'll be better, i don't think too many people like sad endings, i create love triangles all the time and sometimes i change course about who ciera marries, it's not hard, just choose your favorite guy and have her take him, simple as that."

Actually, Claire leaving town is a good story twist in my opinion. All the gooey, happy fluffy HM fanfics get kinda repetitive after a while. Not every story has a happy ending, especially the good ones.

Maybe that's just me, though.

I'd like to see how you do this, Amando. I can't wait for the next few chapters!

yeah. I think that you should do what is right in your opinion amando. don't let others misguide you.

dear diary,
i just have fun with trent this afternoon..i get annoyed once because he is sooo
scientifical speaking..but we have fun in the end...
i am so happy...
i wish i had three hearts for cliff,gray and trent...
claire

*as usual,the next morning..claire awoke up very early..she hurriedly went to her two female chickens..chix and yolly..*
*at the coop*
claire:*looks at chix*ahh..chix..this maybe a stupid question i'm asking you...who should i gave my heart?
to a humble hopeful homeless,or to an inspiring wannabe blacksmith or a scientifical speaking serious doctor?
chix:*stares*cluck..
claire:how about you yolly?*stares at yolly*
yolly:*stares*cluck...
claire:ahh..never mind..here's your food..*takes chicken feed from bag,then puts the feed in the feed box*
*looks at her wallet*aha!!!it's time to buy a cow!!!yay!!
*she hurriedly went to barley's farm..but she bumped cliff which he is in a hurry too..*

cliff:morning!!i'm so sorry about what happened..you look like your in a hurry..
claire:morning too..!i'm gonna buy a cow..
cliff:can i..
claire:what?
cliff:can i come with you?
claire:sure...
cliff:let's get going!!!

*at the store,barley was wipping his eyes*
barley:how's the newlyweds?
claire and cliff:HA!!no..*blush*
claire:i'm just here to buy a cow..
barley:ahh...claire right..what's gonna be the name of the cow?
claire:hmm..*puts finger on her head*
cliff:i hope you chose a great name..
claire:*looks at cliff*
barley:so what gonna be her name?
claire:CLAFF!!!
barley:*shocked*what a...*cough*pre..tty name..
cliff:why claff?*shocked*
claire;it's you and me..see claire and cliff..in that way i'll remember you..always..
cliff:*blush*how kind of you..
claire:don't worry i'll take care of her..always as if i was caring for you..
cliff:*bush*thanks..
claire:let's go now..
barley:(how sweet)now...i'll just deliver it to you..
claire:thanks..let's go now cliff..*low voice and sweet voice*
cliff:sure..

*the two went outside and parted with saying a sweet goodbye to each other*

chapter 10-tool making..
dear diary,
claff a.k.a claire and cliff
is now part of my growing farm family..
i hope to see new changes life gives me..
and cliff,i hope he feels the same as me..
claire
(lights out in the farm)
(while at cliff's room,cliff is quietly staring at the bright face of the moon)
cliff:i hope more changes to come in my next stay here..good night..claire..

(the next morning)
Claire: (yawn) Ah.. What a wonderful morning!
(Claire quickly fix her bed and then take a bath and put some new clothes, after that she made a simple mouth-watering miso soup..)
Claire: (sip) Ahh.. What a wonderful energizing soup..
(knock, knock)
(The blonde was shocked for someone to knock at her door, is it something good, bad or am i imagining things? The blonde said to herself)
(She first wipe her face with a tissue and then fix the table)
(she opened the door and shocked to see)
Gray: Hi!
Claire: Oh Hi... You surprised me?! What do you need?
Gray: I made this tool, it's a axe, could you try it? (Points on a stump)
Claire: Wow.. I'll be happy too!!
(gets the axe)
(Claire sets the axe at the stump and releases the axe at the stump)
(the axe shread into pieces)
Claire: (Shock!!)
Gray: (Mad) I knew it! I should make it more better right?
Claire: Don't be mad Gray, Let's make this axe together..
Gray: (Blush) We could use grandpa's shop, he's not at the shop this moment, he said i'm free to use it.. so let's go!
Claire: Axe making here we go!!!
(At Saibara's Shop)
Gray: Well, here we are.. Let's start doing it.. just give me what i needed Claire..
Claire: Sure Gray
Gray: Hammer
Claire: (gets the hammer) here
Gray: Iron
Claire: (get the iron) here
(pound, pound)
Gray: Umm.. Wooden handle
Claire: (gets the wooden handle) here
(pound, pound)
Gray: Ahh.. Can you get me some water?
Claire: (Gets a glass of water) here...
(gets the handkerchief) here's the handkerchief..
Gray: I didn't ask for it..
Claire; No, i mean (then claire used the handkerchief to remove the sweat in gray's face)
Gray: Th--Thanks (blush)

such a good story

thanks!!

it's getting so exciting! not that it wasn't exciting to start with