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Amaya Oki
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PostSubject: love? a poem   love?    a poem EmptyFri Nov 13, 2009 4:18 pm

a poem I wrote about a month ago, sorry if its not that good. i feel like its unfinished.....but i can't write anymore on it yet untill i get the feeling for it again


Love?

I lay in the dark
thinking of your name

I cry out but silence answers
leaving me to cry in vain


I lay cold in my room
alone again in my bed

No more friends to disract me
from the painful thoughts in my head


I think about your hateful,accusing voice
deeply cutting me with every blow.

Then remember the sweet, loving voice
from just a few nights ago


Surely not,
surely they do not belong to the same name
but sadly it is true

The one who holds my heart,
the one with the power to break me
is you


How is it that one that brings so much happiness
causes so many tears

Why is it that something I greatly cheerish
is the greatest of my fears.
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PostSubject: Re: love? a poem   love?    a poem EmptySat Nov 14, 2009 8:23 am

i am not really good with poems so i appreciate this poem..good job!
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PostSubject: Re: love? a poem   love?    a poem EmptySat Nov 14, 2009 12:51 pm

That was really lovely.
I think it's great-and it isn't unfinished.
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PostSubject: Re: love? a poem   love?    a poem EmptySat Nov 14, 2009 4:13 pm

Whoa! You've got a knack for poems Amaya! That was amazing! And it didn't feel unfinished to me either but you could totally write more if you wanted to!
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PostSubject: Re: love? a poem   love?    a poem EmptySun Nov 15, 2009 7:25 am

i love poems too..they are good..with all the rhyming words..
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PostSubject: Re: love? a poem   love?    a poem EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 4:03 pm

what a beautiful poem Amaya. I loved reading it heh it made me smile! Nicely done. I love you
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