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Eternal Silence Admin
Number of posts : 6205 Roleplay Name : Arden Auiban Awards :
| Subject: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:52 am | |
| I know this poem is kinda bad-ish. I wrote it in a state of boredom. It was authored in about three seconds. D: Like I said, though, I'm bored. XD
When the snowflakes fall Catching on your skin Sit back and watch the sunrise Watch your life begin
With every new arrival There is a rebirth The rekindling of joy, Of merriment, of mirth
No matter the occasion Or time of the year There is love When dear ones are near
And the problems you had All seem to melt away The sun is rising, With it, a new day
Last edited by Eternal Silence on Sun Mar 15, 2009 3:56 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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35bell Moderator
Number of posts : 5158 Roleplay Name : Genna Song
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| Subject: Re: Untilted Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 2:06 am | |
| I'm soo bad at making Poems! Your good at it!~ I loved it~ Make more! Or else.... | |
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Sanaka*~ Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1301 Roleplay Name : Frederik Awards :
| Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 2:19 pm | |
| At first it looks kind of lonely and dark then it gets brighter how awesome ^_^ | |
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gothica800 Banned
Number of posts : 4632
| Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 2:21 pm | |
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Eternal Silence Admin
Number of posts : 6205 Roleplay Name : Arden Auiban Awards :
| Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 3:53 pm | |
| Kyaa~~ Thank you! | |
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gothica800 Banned
Number of posts : 4632
| Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 3:54 pm | |
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Eternal Silence Admin
Number of posts : 6205 Roleplay Name : Arden Auiban Awards :
| Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:01 am | |
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moonlighto3 Farmer
Number of posts : 800 Roleplay Name : Mist Evergreen
| Subject: Awesome Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:30 pm | |
| your poem is awesome! I want to be a writer someday, and i want to be like you! you're so good in making poems and stories. I showed many people my stories and poems, but i don't think they're amazed.Not like you..(Wait,, I'm such a blabbermouth..) well, goodluck in making them! | |
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Eternal Silence Admin
Number of posts : 6205 Roleplay Name : Arden Auiban Awards :
| Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:54 pm | |
| Daaawwww...I feel all warm and fuzzy...*hugs* And I'm sure you're AHMAHZING at writing...but you'll have to post some stories here for me to make sure, hint hint! XD | |
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moonlighto3 Farmer
Number of posts : 800 Roleplay Name : Mist Evergreen
| Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:03 pm | |
| - Eternal Silence wrote:
- Daaawwww...I feel all warm and fuzzy...*hugs* And I'm sure you're AHMAHZING at writing...but you'll have to post some stories here for me to make sure, hint hint! XD
ok! i promise i'll post some stories here, that's for sure! and if i did post something, could you please take a look at it? and comment on it Honestly because some people comment on works that they're good just to make them feel better.. see you around! -moonlight | |
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