Morning Star-a Love story

I was 16 at the time, and betrothed to a man named Edger Heartman. My family
was a middle-class one, and Edger's was a first class. "His father a governer." my mother had gushed. "he is so handsom, you'll love Edger!" "well, i must admit, Edger was very good-looking, but-there was just something about him that didn't attract me." "perhaps it was his pride, or the way he veiwed people less forchunte." "Either way, i didn't like him." "And i didn't want to be a first-class lady either." "I would rather be begging for money on the streets then be consumed by wealth and greed." "but, as a girl in my scocity at the time, i didn't have much of that deciction."

"Orginally, the plan was for Edger and I to be married here, in great britain. "but those plans changed a few weeks ago, when a boat that clamied to be "unsinkable" made its way into the paper." "It was then that my future in-laws and my parents decided for us to go to America to get married, and raise a family there." "To be Honest, i didn't think much of it except 'i'm going to be married to the king of idiots in a supposed 'free land'." "Little did i know, the adventure-and romance-that waited for me on the boat known as 'The Morning Star'."



"Sophia Grace Lethner!" my mother shouted for me in the supermarket. I instandly felt my ears grow hot. "Mom!" I snapped. I hated my name. It was so stupid. Sophia Grace? It sounded to eligante. To lady-like. And that wasn't who I was at all. "oh, there you are." my mother said gracfully twirling toward me. "you scared me." "come now, we must prepare for the wedding." "it's in a month you know, and it's never to early to start~" i rolled my eyes as my mother babbled on. my mother was a social-climber. So uppity and talkitive. Now don't get me wrong, i love my mother, she's just to-girly for my taste. I had always been diffrent from other british dames. While walking with books on their head, i would be playing in the mud. While waring fancy dressing and drinking expensive tea, i would be waring play clothes and drink water only when i got thirsty. The Debutaunt life wasn't for me. and, it never would be.

(finishe dis later, please tell me how it is~ don't hold back!)

"You stole this from the movie didn't you?"

it's based off the movie. i didn't steal anything. although i've never seen the movie, i kno what it's about and i read about it online. it's similer to it.

"I thought so." n.n

so, how is it so far? :3 i've deicided, i want to be a really good writer, so i will take critism and suggestions! >:3

"Good and i can't wait for the romance, but is he gonna die like the guy did on titanic?"

hmm dunno, it would make sence but it's kinda obveous.

"C'mon make a LASTING love."

maybe i'll make a twisted ending full of violence and ecplations and DEATH! >

You might want to change the name of the boat. It could be considered plagirism or otherwise it's illeagel. It has a nice concept to it, but it is too close to the novel The Titanic (Yes, the movie is based of the book.)

"She's right." -.-

i changed the name of the boat. maybe i should delete it and lable it "void" cu i got nothin'

"It doesn't matter."

still, i don't want to copywrite anything

"Right!" O.O

so...should i change the plot? i still want it to be about a girl getting on a baot and the boat sinking due to some sort of problem.

"No the plots perfect keep it like it is."

r u sure it's not copywrite? *worried*

"I'm positive it's not." n.n

alright.

Yep. It's not copywritten.

Kwooooooar~! Reluctant marriage! I'm so gonna eat this up every time you update it.

You've got a nice plot going here! Not many people write about things like that~

Can I give you some advice? There is one book you might like to read~
It's called 'Dragonmede'. I seriously reccomend it for you, it has all this stuff towards the middle about reluctant marriage and evil husbands and death and stuff.

You've thrilled me. That's worse than killing.

oh dear 0.0 ya, unlike my other unfinished stories, i'll try to finish dis one ^^' kitty's my editoir!

LOOOOOVE the update~
Gurrrrrglelygloo... KEEP GOING.

yay <3