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IT WAS AWSOME!
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eh, it was alright
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what a pretty story!
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i still hate it
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u should rigtht MORE!
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afsangel
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PostSubject: Broken Soul Part 4   Broken Soul Part 4 EmptyTue Oct 28, 2008 1:15 am

Alison woke up and streched. her hair droped around her face. she glanced at the calender. "todays the day." she said with a smile. "she got up and got dressed. but not in her usual plaid shirt and overalls. she dressed on a black dress and pussed her hair up into a pontail and put a white flower in her hair. "i'm off taka-chan!" she said waving. "all right, take care!" alison ran down from the farm in the town to see rock and merlin waiting for her. "your late." rock said with a frown. "barly." alison replied. "common." merlin said with a smile. "lets go." merlin grabed alison's left hand and rock grabed her right. the three freinds walked doen into part of the vally and walked upto a tombstone. alison kneeled down and smiled. "hi dad!" she said. 'i'm doing good!" "so theres not need to worry." 'i can belive its been 8 years." rock sighed. "well, were here NOW!~" she said cheerfully. she took put a blancket and spred t next to her father's grave. she started merrily taking food out of her picnic basket. "where eating HERE!?" rock cried confused. 'of course!" alison said happily. "daddy won't mind." "he'd WANT this." merlin sat down next to her. rock rolled his eyes. "well, whatever." he said sitting down next to her. "but if we get caught don't come cryin to me." "alright!^^" alison said happily. <its tru daddy, its been 8 years since you moved on. but it somehow seems your still here> <i know you want me to be happy, and i am.> <i have the greatest freinds in the world.> <please continue to watch over me with mom!>


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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul Part 4   Broken Soul Part 4 EmptyMon Dec 29, 2008 5:42 am

no no make more! ><
I love these!
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul Part 4   Broken Soul Part 4 EmptyWed Dec 31, 2008 2:51 pm

"If you don't make more I'm going to court!" Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul Part 4   Broken Soul Part 4 EmptyWed Dec 31, 2008 3:42 pm

LOL! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul Part 4   Broken Soul Part 4 EmptyWed Dec 31, 2008 10:03 pm

gothica800 wrote:
"If you don't make more I'm going to court!" Mad

me tooooooo!
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