| Christmas Hope Ch. 2 | |
|
|
|
Author | Message |
---|
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:55 pm | |
| Ch. 2 A New Lifestyle
Hope sat in the backseat of her father's car and stared out the window. It had been a year since the tragic accident. And her baby brother's first birthday. He sat in a car seat next to Hope. It had been hard since Cindy died. Dan soon was layed off work and havinf trouble looking for it. He was also having a hard time getting over his lost love. But he knew Cindy wouldn't want this kind of sadness for her children, so Dan would most of the time fake a smile and try to get his daughter to laugh and be happy. He didn'd want his daughter to suffer like he was. "hey." he said gently noticing his daughter's sad expression. "what's the matter tiger?" he asked tenderly. 'when is mommy coming home from her vacation?" hope asked impationtly. It took all of dan's effort to keep smiling. "not for a while sweety." he said. The three were headed to Hope's grandparents' house to celibrate Max's first birthday. Hope went back to her somber expression. "ey, cheer up tiger mm k?" he said. "we're going to grandma and grandpa's house to have fun." "you know what grandpa will do if he catches you with a sour face like that. Hope smiled wickedly. She knew exactly what would happen. He grandpa would pick her up and toss her over his sholder and spin her around until she was so dizy she couldn't walk, or think streight. Then grandma would scold him and grandpa would give an innocent face and excuse. Hope smiled even wider at the thought of this. "that's the smile i want to see!" Dan said happily. They finally pulled into the drive way and got out of the car | |
|
| |
Kritten Admin
Number of posts : 8780 Roleplay Name : Kitty Kitz Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:01 am | |
| It doesn't make sense that Dan wouldn't tell Hope. It would make it easier in the long run for Hope. | |
|
| |
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:09 am | |
| well, that is true, but you're dealing with someone who doesn't really know how to tell his daughter her mother died. Keep in mind that at the time, hope is about 6 or 7. even if she is at that age, dan doesn't really know how to explain it to her. | |
|
| |
Kritten Admin
Number of posts : 8780 Roleplay Name : Kitty Kitz Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:17 am | |
| I get your point, but wouldn't Hope by now would have lost all hope of her mother's return. A year at her age is a very long time for her. It would seem like forever for her. | |
|
| |
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:24 am | |
| you're right about that, but hope is one fo those children who just don't know when to stop believing. Which is actually a very good quality in most situatons. In the next couple of chapters though, hope starts to relize more and more what all the things that have been happening mean. she starts to understand more. | |
|
| |
Kritten Admin
Number of posts : 8780 Roleplay Name : Kitty Kitz Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:27 am | |
| okay. I'll have to wait then. | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:29 am | |
| | |
|
| |
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:42 pm | |
| thanks! that really makes me happy. i try | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:04 pm | |
| yeah, Your stories are waaay better than mine~ | |
|
| |
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:22 pm | |
| awwww come now, don't say that. i would like to read your stories. | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:23 pm | |
| | |
|
| |
Kritten Admin
Number of posts : 8780 Roleplay Name : Kitty Kitz Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 12:55 am | |
| I would. ^^ Come on I put one of my stories on, so you can too. | |
|
| |
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 12:55 am | |
| come now sweety, it can't be that bad. | |
|
| |
Kritten Admin
Number of posts : 8780 Roleplay Name : Kitty Kitz Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 12:56 am | |
| Not as bad as the edited version of Tears of Bood. | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:29 am | |
| hahaha no, you guys dont wanna know how horrible i write my stories >.< | |
|
| |
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:53 am | |
| well, the truth is, i kinda suck to. i get thesse great ideas and work out a plot in such, but when it comes to actually writing them, i have trouble. >_< | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:57 am | |
| Really? I even have a hard time on what what im going to write about >.> <.< | |
|
| |
gothica800 Banned
Number of posts : 4632
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:11 am | |
| "Well at least you don't suffer from headaches because you have so many ideas and an overactive imagination!" | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:12 am | |
| yes, i suffer from headaches. No, not because I have so many ideas. | |
|
| |
Kritten Admin
Number of posts : 8780 Roleplay Name : Kitty Kitz Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:15 am | |
| - gothica800 wrote:
- "Well at least you don't suffer from headaches because you have so many ideas and an overactive imagination!"
Finally! Someone who understands me! | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:17 am | |
| I suffer so much from school, its been hard because im studying for college. | |
|
| |
afsangel Special Member
Number of posts : 6693 Roleplay Name : Kazumi Martin
Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:18 am | |
| lol! headachs to suck. BTW, congrats on your wedding. i'm so envious! i can't even spell it right! XD (that happens alot) | |
|
| |
foxtail616 Master Farmer
Number of posts : 1445 Roleplay Name : Fox Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:19 am | |
| lol, ive never even heard of that word o.o | |
|
| |
Kritten Admin
Number of posts : 8780 Roleplay Name : Kitty Kitz Awards :
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:20 am | |
| I'm going to tell you what every teacher tells me... "When you first begin writing a story/paper is the hardest part. It gets easier as you go on." | |
|
| |
gothica800 Banned
Number of posts : 4632
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:21 am | |
| "Thanks afsangel why don't you come down everyone in forget me not is invited except nick!" | |
|
| |
Sponsored content
| Subject: Re: Christmas Hope Ch. 2 | |
| |
|
| |
| Christmas Hope Ch. 2 | |
|